Reviews for The Amazing Life of Amaterasu Mizatomi
Ragnarok Dark Princess chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
! I easily LOL over this story...
Bright Eyes chapter 10 . 12/20/2008
Yay an update!

I liked this chapter but the only suggestions I have are bolding the names and italizing the actions. I had to keep going back.

So keep writing! Update soon!
guesswho chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
yeah, so i was too lazy to actually change the stat of this for chaps 8/9 but it's 4 those...yeah. so to put it plainly, idk what to say.!
totally loving it chapter 9 . 10/3/2008
PLOT TWIST!

Anyway, er... Um... Yeah...

I loved it! :D

Update soon
Alice totally a pirate chapter 8 . 9/24/2008
Okay, so, here's my review!

I like the story and the concept and it makes me happy when you update :D

But, could you pretty please make the actions a little bit eaiser to see/read. Because sometimes (I don't know why) I read it and I see -looks away- No. And my only reaction is, Whoah! Where'd that come from?

Yes... That's it! Love it!
guesswho chapter 7 . 8/14/2008
Oh the curse of knowing the writer! ...jk... Anyway, just post the next episode already! And a physical weakness wouldn't kill her, but I'm glad she fell off the tube. And again more MIzuko! Maybe a less buzzkill-ish one though...yeah.
avidreader again chapter 6 . 8/14/2008
hello amaterasu.i read your new chapter, but i'm sorry to say it still seems a little mary sue-ish. in previous chapters, you said that the person who held izo atsushi and amami was the leader of an organization, so how could amami, a student, defeated him with one technique? and how does every guy like her?
Squigit chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Good, but not so many swear words next time. And you might want too be more explanitary in the character. And the Japanesse words, they don't make much sence. Mabey have a directory at the end explaining what the Japanesse words mean. Or you could me a bit more explantory.
Alice totally a pirate chapter 6 . 7/31/2008
Yay Haruki!

I loved this chapter. Keep on writing ;D
Alice not your bff jill chapter 5 . 7/31/2008
I'm on the edge of my seat...
Alice not your bff jill chapter 4 . 7/31/2008
Loved the chapter!
Alice is not a bear chapter 3 . 7/31/2008
*edgeofseat*

Must. Go. To. Next. Chapter. Now!

(lovethechapter)
Alice totally a pirate chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
I liked the story, but does like Amami have this magical power that gets guy to love her.

If she does, I want to know how she got it.

Mmkay, I liked the chapter and the ramen was great.

Plz, gimme a pirate.

Peace, Love, and Pirates

-Alice
Alice not your bff jill chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Okay, so, I think this is a very good kick off chapter and I can't wait for more background on the characters and for fun stuffs.

Peace, Love, and Soy Milk:

- Alice
SodieAsh chapter 6 . 7/25/2008
its awesome! the amami/atsushi part was so cute nd i loved it! keep it up!
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