Reviews for Through The Cracks
Ketia.Tsuki chapter 4 . 4/28/2008
Aww I love your drabbles so far! :] Keep them coming! Love you my Yuki-chan!

reeselynrose chapter 2 . 4/25/2008
Okay, good I guess. Overall rating would probably be 8 on a scale of 1-10 (10 being good and 1 being bad) But good job. I don't see any grammar mistakes YAY it bothers me when there are some! But great job, really.
reeselynrose chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
I counted, it has 100 words. Great story, I like your idea of a challenge and write 100 words etc. Good job!
asylum writer chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Review marathon - link in profile.

Nice job using details to tell the story. It worked well for this short 100 word piece. (FP's not usually right about word count, by the way.)

I'm not sure about the end, though. I thought Yuki asked her if she wanted him to show her around, but it says "The only answer she got" - Aubrey's not asking a question, is she? It's unclear.

I'd suggest stating the theme you wrote this for.