Reviews for Watch out!
Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
simple, wonderful, and tricky. its like a girl running from her wedding
Bavand chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
Oh man, your pen name is well chosen because you have a wry wit. It's a very apt description of someone running around with their head cut off kind of thing. Fabulous!

Julie
Glowing Aura chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Haha...what? I don't get it, but that's what makes it funny. Maybe if I think hard enough it will come to me, but right now it's 3 AM and if I think too hard...I don't know what will happen. Oh my.

Cute and fluffy, but fun. Nice job.
Lise Meitner chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
This is pretty good! I like short poems, and this one manages to convey a point without being too drawn-out. The only thing I didn't like was all the exclammation points, but I suppose that's just personal preference. Anyway, good job :)
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Good piece. I don't think it's as powerful as you wanted it to be, but I like it a lot anyway! :) Write on!

~Anna~ _