Reviews for Cut
MockingJuliet chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
I really liked this evan though it's short. Haiku i presume? If so, i think your lacking a syllable in the second line. That is if i'm remembering Haikus correctly. Im not trying to be mean or picky! just to help! I really did like it though. It was interesting. Second thing, is the white suppose to be the sink? Maybe? Im not sure whats suppose to be white. Other than that, good job :)
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
short and simple but so vivid. great job :)
Kittenn1011 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
O.O I love it!
Starleaf chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I like this... especially the last line. :)
A Sweet Escape chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
good use of imagery.
MyWorldisBlack chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
physical cuts often hurt less than mental ones if you ask me but its still a great poem
Link Broken chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I could see the red and white when i read that.
Unknown Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
"Down the drain I fall" Great line! It's short and yet you create a vivid picture. Good poem!
Edensong chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
Was this meant to be a haiku? The middle line only seems to have 6 syllables.

I didn't really understand the tie-dye line. The red is blood, but what's the white?

A well-used theme - it's a great poetry topic, I've written on it myself - I love seeing it from others' perspectives. Very strong ending line. Keep writing!