|Reviews for Am I invisible?|
| PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
This poem is beautiful. There are several situations that I can imagine being illustrated by this from being ostracized, bullied in school, to being neglected. As I've been in all of those situations, this poem really appeals to me.
| thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Tears to paint a scene- beautiful imagery.
| BlackestOpal chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Your haiku seems honest.
Instead of just making it weepy and begging for attention, you're acknowledging your methods and explaining them.
I don't think that makes sense, it's late and I can't manage to word my reviews properly.
But I like it a lot and it works well.
| Starleaf chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Wow, I like this. Sad and kind of creepy almost. Very good :)
| A Sweet Escape chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
nicely done. again, nice use of imagery.
| MyWorldisBlack chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
thats so true
| Unknown Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
Even better! You've found the key to communicating the message of what one feels when the certain person doesn't know they exist, and in a Haiku. I've found Haikus hard to write. Without the right words, they don't convey what they need to; you've accomplished it! Great poem!
| angels know the rest chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
This is really a great haiku, very beautiful with a desperate tone. I like it!
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
Excellent haiku. I just love ''Until I'm at a crawl'' and you have wonderful flow. Keep it Up!