Reviews for Am I invisible?
PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
This poem is beautiful. There are several situations that I can imagine being illustrated by this from being ostracized, bullied in school, to being neglected. As I've been in all of those situations, this poem really appeals to me.
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Tears to paint a scene- beautiful imagery.

x mandy
BlackestOpal chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Your haiku seems honest.

Instead of just making it weepy and begging for attention, you're acknowledging your methods and explaining them.

I don't think that makes sense, it's late and I can't manage to word my reviews properly.

But I like it a lot and it works well.
Starleaf chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Wow, I like this. Sad and kind of creepy almost. Very good :)
A Sweet Escape chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
nicely done. again, nice use of imagery.
MyWorldisBlack chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
thats so true
Unknown Sorrow chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
Even better! You've found the key to communicating the message of what one feels when the certain person doesn't know they exist, and in a Haiku. I've found Haikus hard to write. Without the right words, they don't convey what they need to; you've accomplished it! Great poem!
angels know the rest chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
This is really a great haiku, very beautiful with a desperate tone. I like it!
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
Excellent haiku. I just love ''Until I'm at a crawl'' and you have wonderful flow. Keep it Up!