Reviews for A Boat at Sea
reaching-for-sunlight chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Beautiful imagery. :)
PhoenixPhilosophy chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
everyone says the metaphor of the boat, on the "sea of life...blah blah blah" is very cliche, but not in this case. I think your poem is very original. Great imagery "Licking the salt off my fingertips," I could taste salt. Great poem.