Reviews for Along Came Rita |
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![]() ![]() why is it too bad that jean and alex are related to patricia finally he made a move! i wonder when she's going to figure out that diego is daniel :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story, i think even more than Bam! :O must read more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! I freaking loved it! Although the speech annoyed me a little bit...But it's all good xP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I have to admit the plot was good, Patricia was a little twisted. I couldn't understand her reasoning well. Happy for Daniel and Eleanor seems to have finally grown up... some what. Yeah... I'm still not very willing to forgive Eleanor for her previous behavior... yeah I liked her as a kid. Well anyway xD Great Story. You're a convincing writer. Usually if I found a story too annoying, I'd stop reading it and forget it but you had characters that I couldn't help loving. D I'm glad I read the story too. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Isabella shows her the light! Nevermind... and here I thought I was going to start liking Eleanor... Jesus Christ she's dumber than I thought. I'm so tempted to stop reading this but I can't because I'll feel sorry for Daniel; to end his romance here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Although people are complaining about Rita, I'm finding myself more annoyed at Eleanor. There isn't much that I'm liking about Eleanor. Liking Isabella thought ] and Zach is a sweetheart. Diego has a charming character too. Loving them but seriously I'm getting annoyed at Eleanor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that was really cute! i speak french so when i saw that i was in the aw mode lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story! )I love stories set in this era! And Patricia and Rita made me mad, they were so annoying! And though I see WHY you kept the title you did, it doesn't exactly seem to suit this piece, since Rita doesn't have a main MAIN role. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story and thought you did a brilliant job with the characters! |
![]() ![]() Loved your characters and the story you wove! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL cute! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was absolutely beautiful. Especially the ending. I've seen alot of stories with the same ending, a baby coming, but this is quite possibly the sweetest one I've read yet. Great job! Loved the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that little ending, "let's kiss." Sorry, I had been caught up with other stuff but I'm finishing up reading this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ha! i knew daniel was mr richards! :D too bad it's finished :( awesome story , fellow victorian! :P |