Reviews for Along Came Rita
AerisLockheart50 chapter 10 . 12/31/2012
why is it too bad that jean and alex are related to patricia

finally he made a move! i wonder when she's going to figure out that diego is daniel :P
peacelovejay chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
love this story, i think even more than Bam! :O must read more :D
Zayren Heart chapter 18 . 8/14/2010
OH MY GOD! I freaking loved it!

Although the speech annoyed me a little bit...But it's all good xP
Rooffoo chapter 18 . 6/24/2010
Ok I have to admit the plot was good, Patricia was a little twisted. I couldn't understand her reasoning well. Happy for Daniel and Eleanor seems to have finally grown up... some what. Yeah... I'm still not very willing to forgive Eleanor for her previous behavior... yeah I liked her as a kid. Well anyway xD Great Story. You're a convincing writer. Usually if I found a story too annoying, I'd stop reading it and forget it but you had characters that I couldn't help loving. D I'm glad I read the story too. Thanks.
Rooffoo chapter 14 . 6/24/2010
Isabella shows her the light! Nevermind... and here I thought I was going to start liking Eleanor... Jesus Christ she's dumber than I thought. I'm so tempted to stop reading this but I can't because I'll feel sorry for Daniel; to end his romance here.
Rooffoo chapter 11 . 6/24/2010
Although people are complaining about Rita, I'm finding myself more annoyed at Eleanor. There isn't much that I'm liking about Eleanor.

Liking Isabella thought ] and Zach is a sweetheart. Diego has a charming character too. Loving them but seriously I'm getting annoyed at Eleanor.
Raz- Ryu ashley chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
aw that was really cute! i speak french so when i saw that i was in the aw mode lol
Artume chapter 18 . 3/11/2010
Nice story! )I love stories set in this era! And Patricia and Rita made me mad, they were so annoying! And though I see WHY you kept the title you did, it doesn't exactly seem to suit this piece, since Rita doesn't have a main MAIN role.
little-daisie-wolf chapter 17 . 3/9/2010
I really liked this story and thought you did a brilliant job with the characters!
three chapter 18 . 1/8/2010
Loved your characters and the story you wove! Thank you!
I Murder on Impulse chapter 18 . 5/12/2009
LOL cute!

xx
MaskedNightingale chapter 18 . 2/19/2009
Wow, that was absolutely beautiful.

Especially the ending.

I've seen alot of stories with the same ending, a baby coming, but this is quite possibly the sweetest one I've read yet.

Great job!

Loved the story!
MaskedNightingale chapter 17 . 2/19/2009
I love that little ending, "let's kiss."

Sorry, I had been caught up with other stuff but I'm finishing up reading this.
Lucy-the-bookworm chapter 18 . 11/15/2008
I really enjoyed this story good job!
pcookieness chapter 18 . 11/10/2008
ha! i knew daniel was mr richards! :D

too bad it's finished :(

awesome story , fellow victorian! :P
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