Reviews for Difference of Opinion
runningintriangles chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
I'm sorry for my lack of critique, I only wanted to say that is is quite cute and I really enjoyed it. Cheers!
This is Moi chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
DUDE. this is so pro! i really, really like it~

xEmoMuffinx chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
"peaking into the rooms," - peeking.

"Quickly, he moved onto," - moved "on"?

"His parents had told him that little children should not play with electric things." - just leave it at "electricity".

"Ben allowed himself to be lead downstairs, to the dining room." - led.

"Happily, he ate one leaf." - according to my limited knowledge of them, I don't think you one that.

Like the tone and the melodrama. As in, the exaggerated suspense. Really cute.

And is there some particular reason you're capitalising Brussels sprouts?

Oh great, the spell check thing told me that brussels was not a word. "


Ok. Now that it's been bored into you three times. (depending on the order you read them in) I hope it helps.


"Super-Ben"! Not.

"I love Brussels Sprouts""! Though that's a dead give-away.

"Honour over Obedience"!

Err, yeah. I'm lame.