Reviews for Melody in C minor
Animewolf089 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
I know the feeling.. I won't type as much as I have in the last review, since I'm sure you won't want to read through something that big from a random stalke-I mean, stranger, so I'll save you the agony of that ;)

Even if you have so much to lose, even if you have everything to lose, love anyway.. Because then, you wouldn't ask yourself, would it have worked out between us? You wouldn't ask yourself if she (or maybe he, for you straight readers) was happy now, with some other person that isn't you. Sure, maybe it'll happen again. Maybe you'd lose her (or again, him for the straight readers) like you did the others. Maybe you'd lose your faith again. But maybe juust maybe.. You won't lose that person.

But again, what do I know? Haha.
breakthehabit chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Good job. :D
Sara Evans chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
This is so very different from your other work because it is so much more personal; fact rather than fiction I suppose. Really relatable and there's lines throughout that are just perfectly put together. Makes me wonder how long it took you to write. Nice work.
YouNeverKnowThinkItOver chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
When I read this, I had the strange feeling that I knew this from somewhere. Then I's almost just like my life. But that's how I'm interpreting this. This has really made me think.

p.s-love the correlation between this and the C minor

: ) YouNeverKnow
phoenix6787 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Thats a powerful piece of writing...definitely written in a minor key (and C minor is oh so pretty...on the piano at least). Upon reading the title I had to go looking for my favorite C minor piece...Frederic Chopin Nocturne in C minor seemed to fit it rather nicely.

You have such depth to your writing, I think thats why I enjoy it so much. Even this piece which appears to be highly personal, you take the risk and put yourself out there. Whether it be an outlet...or that demon possessing you, keep writing. I think its a gift. On a final note, a line in that piece really struck me "I had asked you not to fall in love with meā€¦but you are a stubborn one". I identified with that A LOT and learned that it can't be controlled, it just happens. Wish I had some wise thing to say, but I really don't. Just hope things turn out ok.
chibichoco chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
Wow... very well written. I really get what you're saying... :)
Harley Quinn Davidson chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
You know the part about the caged demon, I understand. It seems to me that you are able to write my feelings that I can not. It is a very powerful thing love, it changes everything. Keep writting, its good.
MichelleMagly chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I remember the first time a girl said she loved me I went into a panic. What's bugging ya?