|Reviews for voiceless|
| One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I'm so sorry to do this to you, but I'm going to put my bitch-face on and say I didn't like this poem much at all. Firstly there was an inconsistency to the way you did it - halfway through the poem it changes from lines starting with no capitals to lines starting nearly exclusively with capitals. I also found the way it switched from center alignment to left alignment very annoying! I didn't get in much of the poem's subject matter because of this! Maybe if you re-formatted it, it would sit better with me, but then again, I'm just one person with one opinion.
- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon [link in profile]