|Reviews for Craving Him|
| Estrellagrace chapter 3 . 6/17/2018
I'm wary about adding this to my community bc it has such terrible grammar and the dialogue just isn't right, ya know? Things just aren't right in this, but I guess I'm in a generous mood.
| Manfarr chapter 17 . 10/30/2016
Please please please finish this story I'm desperate to know what's going to happen!
| Anchambe01 chapter 17 . 10/14/2016
Ch.17..talk about a cliff hanger. I can't wait to see what happened next..Does Logan final possess her fully? This is a great read. A little tamer than what in used to but ginuwinely a great read. Waiting for the next installment.
| kawaiihusky chapter 17 . 1/10/2016
why havent you updated?
| cupcake907 chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
write more i'm dying!
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/29/2013
I wish there was more to read
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/11/2013
You seriously needvto update everyone has veen waiting for so long and this is a very good story.
| pcarebear chapter 17 . 11/24/2013
PLEASEEEE write again I love your story! It has been perfect for a cold Nov. weekend at home :)
| BigPuppy chapter 17 . 9/17/2013
OMG! Please upload soon! ! !
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/13/2013
If her first kiss was his then shouldn't his first kiss be hers?
| Anon E. Mouse chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
"Gypsies parents where going out of town for a vacation with my parents for the weekend which left us all alone Gypsie was gonna stay at her grandparents because her brother Neil who was a senior in college and couldn't come home because he had an exam so was my brother Sam as they both went to the same college."
"I had two brothers Jack was the oldest and was in law school followed by Sam who was a senior in worked as an intern in a law firm and was working on an important case so he couldn't come stay with me, so I was gonna go stay with him at his Gypsie and I had wanted to stay together so I had talked to my parents and after a lot of cajoling and making puppy dog faces they had agreed as long as Gyps parents were fine with it."
These are two very good examples of run-on sentences. These are very bad. These are also located throughout the very first chapter. It makes your story very hard to comprehend. They aren't advertising your story very well.
| Erstel 908iu chapter 17 . 12/22/2012
Y U STOP WRITTING?
| Raya47 chapter 17 . 11/18/2012
hope u finish it;)
| jendayi.j.griffith chapter 17 . 10/18/2012
wow this hasnt been updated in ages
| Kairi-21 chapter 17 . 10/16/2012