|Reviews for Craving Him|
| in-white-houses chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
ugh i cant believe someone stole your idea its horrible!
im still in shock over logan kissing another girl and i cant wait for another chapter!
| Chiara chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
You are so EVIL! Leaving us like that. Both of your last two chapters have been clifhangers! Gah, my brain is going to explode from being so anxious to get the next chapter. C'mon, post it, you know you wanna... Plus, I'll give you a cookie! Everyone loves cookies!
| IamyourVampire chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
I am really sorry about someone stealing your story idea. If it helps i love your story and I can't wait to read more)
| ashtonaesthetic chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
ah it was good. Real good. And I read the other story and the first thing that came to mind not even a chapter into it was "wait didn't I read a story like this?" haha so yeah.
WTH? Logan can't be mad! He sure as hell better have a good reason for what he did because I think what Belle did was justified. So please update soon! Don't let that other person get your spirits down. c: Thanks.
| qmab348 chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
awesome story, sorry that someone else took your plot, that is soo tacky. Anyway, what is Logan's problem, why is Belle's and Logan relationship off to such a rocky start? Why do they never seem to get things right?
| leaps chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
i thought that derrick guy was pretty chill. he seems nice. : p
as for logan, he has some explaining to do.
ah, the problems.
this is the 2nd time that i've heard about a story being stolen! _
those stealers should be poked with pencils.
i hope the problem will be resolved soon! don't want this story to be stopped short!
| darkgurl92 chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
o..wonder what's going to happen
their guna fight then make up..lol.
| Takuya.Hikari chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
he better have a good excuse! grr...
cant wait till hte next update .
| Raycheld84 chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
Gr...you are good at the cliff hangers! I hope she gives him hell about that kiss. Also, I'm not sure I like how Gypsie told on her like that... anyhoo really good job! Look forward to an update.
Also, I've totally had that happen when someone steals a story...some people have no originality.
| XxSiennaxX chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
I'm assuming if Gypsie told Logan where he could find Belle that she also would have mentioned the reason they were there in the first place. I hope it was all a huge misunderstanding but I'm not sure that Belle would be very quick in accepting his story.
Please update again soon! :D
| blackrule chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
awwh it ended so abruptly. hehe Thanks for the chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Sorry to hear that someone stole your story. My sister told me it happens alot. Makes me kinda nervous about putting what I plan on writing up, I probably will later once I start college. Anyway I hope to see/read another chapter soon, and thanks for the reply to the review :) I love to encourage a writer to keep writing. If we all didn't get encouragment from time to time we probably wouldn't get anywhere very fast. I speak from experience ;)
| Janeen chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
Ok, you have to stop with the cliff hangers thier killing me.
That was a great chapter and so was the last one.
I can't believe logan could do that to belle.
Belle lost it for a minute and i did like derrick he was cool.
Logan has a ton of explaining to do and so does belle.
Why did gypsie do that to belle?
Again that was an awsome chapter so please update soon. :)
| xiia0moonlight chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
god . someone stole your idea ? that person is so UNORIGINAL ! i dislike people that steal ideas instead their own . we all have a creative oart in ourselves . so why do they refuse to use it ? god . i really dont like those people . argh . .. ... actually , i have plenty of ideas . i dont mind sharing with others but if they stole it from me without my consent i would be livid . and if they are my friends i will personally hunt them down and make their life terrible .. okays , well , this chapter is rather nice yeah . love the part when logan butt in . i hope the next chapter he would explain his actions to belle. keep up the good work ! ;D
| munchkin604 chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
oh i can't wait till the next chapter.
i feel so bad for belle, poor girl. she just wanted to have some fun, stupid logan for making her feel like she's not worth it. i hope you make him work for her ) even though that's all he's ever done LMAO
are we gonna find out who the girl is? LOL i feel like strangling logan's neck - but even if i did, he'd totally be stronger. anywho, love the story! can't wait till the next chapter! )
| lulu chapter 16 . 2/20/2009
let me guess.
it was his evil twin who was kissing the girl.
Oh! or better yet he was kissing her for the greater good of human kind or... vampire kind.
either way i would like to know why he was or who the hell was kissing her n it better be a darn good reason or else Logan gonna get a hard kick where it hurts!