Reviews for Craving Him |
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Kairi-21 chapter 17 . 10/16/2012 plz update |
Unicornswag chapter 17 . 9/23/2012 i know it has been years but if you are still there i would love to know the ending of this story, it is amazingly written and i would love to know what happens |
Stella Rae chapter 17 . 9/16/2012 I love this story please update soon |
FutureCSICrystal chapter 9 . 8/29/2012 The storyline is good, I just really wish that the grammar was better! I see grammatical errors in every sentence! I would understand if there were a few here and there throughout an entire chapter, but this often? I would highly suggest revising this story with Microsoft Word, that way you can have almost all of these fixed. And you need to keep an eye on the run on sentences. I'm not sure if I'll be able to read much more of this story, it's so hard concentrate on when it is written like this. |
J.L. Lofthouse chapter 17 . 6/18/2012 It's a good story but I'm sorry I can't take it she is such a push over with her best friends seems to walk over her and gets what ever she wants I don't think you ment it to seem that way but to me she seems like a right hitch who wants what she wants. As for Logan I can't stad it the way he is treating her I would be great for her to stand up like she did in the beginning now it just seems like she is a push over as for this chapter I'm must admit I'm dissented she didn'tfight more if I saw the man I loved kissing another woman then talking me he doesn't even remember I would be furious it would be cool to see her fight back and make him suffer a bit to show how the character has grown I admit I really don't want her to give in so easily I would slap scream and kick until he is begging on his knees to make her listen but please I'm begging you please make it a bit of a fight don't let her just fall into his arms and tale what he has to say turn the tables. Update soon |
Kat chapter 17 . 6/3/2012 Omg i love your story so much! is it over with? ;( |
Katy chapter 17 . 3/28/2012 Awesome story! I love the characters and the world you've created! :) Just one thing, will you do some more of Logan's POV? Thank you, please please please update soon! |
pisces113 chapter 17 . 3/25/2012 I love this story. There were a few grammatical errors, but other than that I have really enjoyed this story so far. I hope you continue to write this story because I want to read more |
BookAddiction24 chapter 17 . 3/24/2012 You know what I don't understand? You have 396 reviews, and you haven't updated in 3 years. It doesn't make any sense to me. |
BookAddiction24 chapter 16 . 3/24/2012 Well, I'm sad. There's only one more chapter of this to read until I get mad that you haven't updated any more :( |
BookAddiction24 chapter 15 . 3/24/2012 I hope he dies:) |
BookAddiction24 chapter 14 . 3/24/2012 They're such a cute couple! |
BookAddiction24 chapter 13 . 3/24/2012 If I were her, I would have been really embarrassed to see my family. |
BookAddiction24 chapter 12 . 3/24/2012 Haha :) I liked the very ending |
BookAddiction24 chapter 11 . 3/24/2012 *spazz* |