They're. So. Cute.

This is really good!

Logan, you tricky guy!

And did she think that it was Mike?

I don't really know what to say... so... hi.

I just want for her parents to tell her what's going on! And it's kinda weird that he's like, 1000 years old.

I love this story so much! You know what would make me love it more? Editing:)

Right now, I'm doing this little giggly-thingy that I do whenever something absolutely cute happens... that's a good thing.

This is a really good story! You should make a book, but you do need to work on your grammar and punctuation.

This is really good!

Where have you gone? I miss this story very much. I hope you will come back and finish it.

Hey, wonderful story! It really has it's ups and down, but overall it keeps the reader attached:) I also wanted to let you know that I am willing to read over your chapters and fix any obvious errors. You're writing is good, and with a little editing it would be the bomb. . just think about it. I promise not to change any content! But, yep, update soon!

Probably should get a beta-editor. Your story is good, but the grammar is raw. :) keep it up

I yearn for another chapter

Please learn to use punctuation properly. I would like it more if I didn't have to read through your errors and run-on sentences.

omg i feel like a pussy im crying how could he kiss that stupid taylor ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh