hello

lol, i laughed quite a lot throughtout it, so funny! really enjoyed it, please update soon! i hope you didnt stop writing the story or anything coz its fantastic!

Really good first chapter. So intruging!

Wow, quite a read to go through. It was well worth it though. Surprised you put in that other twist as well. I really like her character, full of spunk. A good read with a steady style. Nice work. Especially with all the cute remarks.

You've got several grammatical and/or spelling errors throughout the chapters, but nothing serious enough that a proof read wouldn't fix. Keep at it, you've got something great.

Hi

THis story is really good, and I love the main character - she is so funny :)

Pleas continue - just a thing that i thought: I like it when it's in other people's Point Of Views?

Its not a necessary thing - just what I think :)

xx

hey

this story is really good - please continue.

its getting a little bit um... 'loose' in these last chapters - with the hehe and stuff. it used to be so well written.

anyway.

"It's voice" should be "its voice".

Great job at description. The last part is spooky. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr

excellent so far. It hasnt ended yet eh, look forward to an update.

Interesting addition. I like the dramatic ending line and I enjoyed the dialogue. Nice work. I shall continue reading.

~Twilight Starr

Oh, I really love this novel.

The story is extremely original and intruigin and the text flows really well.

Please update soon :D !

Love your writing! Can't wait for more...

He totally deserved that! AND SHE NEEDS TO TERN BACK TO NORMAL!

Hey i just wanted to tell you that I USED to really enjoy your story i even favorited it. But lately the detail in your story is horible I mean in the beginging your paragraphs had about 3-5 sentences but now theres at the most 2 or 3 I really think you need to take time and put more effort into this story. You should probably look at you first 5 chapters and compare them and you'll see what im talking about.

Im not saying you should stop because i do love it but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put more effort in this because i really enjoyed it.

(Lol for all spelling mistakes)

NO! I LIKED HIM! YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO JARED!

I though she was going to make Damien's life a living hell. Man, I would have like to see her give him a fight. It's not cool, being so commanding like everyone should listen to him!

dun,dun,dun...and the plot thickens! I can't wait to see what happens next!