|Reviews for Celestial of the Night|
| Bipolarised chapter 22 . 12/17/2010
lol, i laughed quite a lot throughtout it, so funny! really enjoyed it, please update soon! i hope you didnt stop writing the story or anything coz its fantastic!
| loolabell chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Really good first chapter. So intruging!
| Ray-Anne chapter 22 . 5/5/2009
Wow, quite a read to go through. It was well worth it though. Surprised you put in that other twist as well. I really like her character, full of spunk. A good read with a steady style. Nice work. Especially with all the cute remarks.
You've got several grammatical and/or spelling errors throughout the chapters, but nothing serious enough that a proof read wouldn't fix. Keep at it, you've got something great.
| 53BookTitles chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
THis story is really good, and I love the main character - she is so funny :)
Pleas continue - just a thing that i thought: I like it when it's in other people's Point Of Views?
Its not a necessary thing - just what I think :)
| 53BookTitles chapter 22 . 3/7/2009
this story is really good - please continue.
its getting a little bit um... 'loose' in these last chapters - with the hehe and stuff. it used to be so well written.
| Twilight Starr chapter 22 . 1/3/2009
"It's voice" should be "its voice".
Great job at description. The last part is spooky. Nice work.
| MamiPapi chapter 22 . 11/27/2008
excellent so far. It hasnt ended yet eh, look forward to an update.
| Twilight Starr chapter 21 . 11/17/2008
Interesting addition. I like the dramatic ending line and I enjoyed the dialogue. Nice work. I shall continue reading.
| XxSiennaxX chapter 22 . 11/12/2008
Oh, I really love this novel.
The story is extremely original and intruigin and the text flows really well.
Please update soon :D !
| PassionateKisses chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Love your writing! Can't wait for more...
| u.no.u.need.the.goth.girl chapter 19 . 11/11/2008
He totally deserved that! AND SHE NEEDS TO TERN BACK TO NORMAL!
| Sorry chapter 22 . 11/11/2008
Hey i just wanted to tell you that I USED to really enjoy your story i even favorited it. But lately the detail in your story is horible I mean in the beginging your paragraphs had about 3-5 sentences but now theres at the most 2 or 3 I really think you need to take time and put more effort into this story. You should probably look at you first 5 chapters and compare them and you'll see what im talking about.
Im not saying you should stop because i do love it but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put more effort in this because i really enjoyed it.
(Lol for all spelling mistakes)
| u.no.u.need.the.goth.girl chapter 11 . 11/11/2008
NO! I LIKED HIM! YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO JARED!
| u.no.u.need.the.goth.girl chapter 9 . 11/11/2008
I though she was going to make Damien's life a living hell. Man, I would have like to see her give him a fight. It's not cool, being so commanding like everyone should listen to him!
| wingsrookie chapter 22 . 11/10/2008
dun,dun,dun...and the plot thickens! I can't wait to see what happens next!