I love their flirting. Its super cute.

I really like it my favorite character was Drew he is so sweet and stubborn.

Owwww this was so cute! I love it!

Love it. So I wrote a review since 13 is to few.

Great one-shot! I really enjoyed it :D

Dialogue seems really forced at the end. Errors with then/than and apostrophes are distracting.

Why did they have sex right away? I saw Chase as sort of prudish and a bit of a tease and you know... He was pretty reluctant from the beginning. Were they doing it doggy style? A bit unromantic if you asked me, lol.

That sweet!

Thi story is amazing! It doesn't seems like one-shot at all! Good job!

I love how you can fit an entire story into a one-shot. You have to be one of my favorite Authors on FP. Just saying :)

Love It!

PK101

Well hot damn... maybe it's because I'm sleep deprived but that was so hot. I mean I know its a one shot but I'd love to dive deeper into Chases family, the boys past, general school life and much much more of the last few hundred words XD

love em'!

I wouldn't want to be on Drew's bad side.

The hospital scene feels a little rushed. It seems to me it would be fairly emotional, but I don't feel it. Maybe the action to thought/feeling ratio is a little off.

Cute though

Aw! It's...wow. I loved it.

Aw I think that this story deserves a review!

Kinda cute... "Girlie ass". XD

Write more... I'll probably read this again... but the weird thing is that there were a few parts in the story that didn't make sense cause of grammar X.X""

but i still liked the story! Drew... LOL bully :S

Shindoo ;D

loved the story, it was sweet yet definaty fun. good on you

I hope you make a sequel to this! It would be GREATLY appreciated!