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Scared Loveless chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I am so sorry. I can almost see your tears and heartache.
flawlessangel08 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Aww sad .Good job, I like the repetition of 'twenty four hours'.
Edensong chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Wow. My heart goes out to you, your family and your grandfather. What a heartfelt and emotional poem. My only suggestion - although in your situation I wouldn't worry about it - is to keep a consistent rhyming scheme. Yours seems to go ABCB, ABCB, ABAB, ABCB, A.

Best of luck through this difficult time.
littlemissvampire21 chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
deep and sad...very meaningful. T_T It was good.