|Reviews for So fast|
| Glowing Aura chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
I like the speed of the haiku, just exactly as the poem says: "It ended so fast." It was well-written for your first haiku.
| Scared Loveless chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I like it. I is very symbolic, and can be interpreted many ways.
| Edensong chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Although you probably had a specific case in mind, I love that this haiku applies to, well, anyone who's died. A bitter reminder of mortality and that we should treasure life. Great first haiku, keep writing.
| Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Pretty good, especially for a first haiku. (:
The syllables are all there, and the lines are well phrased.
Keep it up!