|Reviews for Blood Drinking Tendencies|
| Charlie Star chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Kay, Rushell. I like it, but it sounds like it's trying to be profound. Like your trying to hard to make it sound apathetic. Which I know your not. But others don't. So, I don't know, add a little more detail, a little more life, maybe have her not talk to herself, but think it. Give an overview of her thoughts. It has serious potential.