Reviews for StoryTeller's Beginning: A Prologue |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This seems like a nice beginning to a fantasy story. My only problem here is that it seems a bit too... generic? It's nicely told, don't get me wrong, but I've read a lot of starting-poems like these that basically hint at the same thing. Heroes, villains, true love - we've heard it all before. I wish you would've put your own spin on this. Also, 'Head' should be heed. P As ever, I don't mean to sound harsh, just truthful. |