Reviews for Stays Long Enough
the-foresight chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Usually I don't read the prose posted on this site, my interest really has to be grabbed from the start and your short story manegs to do that perfectly. Your writing style was spot on really, not too overdone so that it feels like purple prose and so clinical that the reader grows bored. Not only that but even in the short amount of words I had a clear idea of the characters.

This is the kind of writing that I've been trying to achieve for something of my own, but have been defeated by a lack of ideas for the style. Maybe this will help me, so for that I thank you.