|Reviews for Murphy's Law|
| ZChan-Kerokero chapter 1 . 1/29
It is very comedic and it is such a great plot. I feel like I'm watching the start of a wonderful romantic comedy!
| nana chapter 3 . 3/20/2010
This is awesome, but kinda sad it hasnt been updated in so long. I really hope you update it one day.
| Nikkei Wolvenchilde chapter 3 . 9/29/2009
All I have to say is LMFAO. I know it's like totally dramatic and serious, but totally funny. I really want to read how they escape! Please, please update!
| in-cloud-9 chapter 3 . 8/15/2009
I really like this story, it's very I have to say the romanian sometimes doesn't make sense,like "ceas tu insuti" actually means "clock yourself" but I doubt someone who doesn't know romanian would know and mind...I am just an evil person :)
| Poptart Guava King chapter 3 . 7/23/2009
this is fun! both of them are idiots -_-
| superscout chapter 3 . 6/24/2009
This story is amazing. Please update it whenever you have the time!
| Chasmodai Blue chapter 3 . 12/21/2008
But I like Marshall's guitar.
I vote it gets smashed over the lady behind the desk's head.
I like this story. Mostly because Toma is Romanian and that is so badass. Because Romanian people rock.
You write very well. Your prose is direct, your storyline is most seriously entertaining. I like your characters quite a bit (see above). Oh yes.
Write more? Yes no?
| DefineNightmare chapter 3 . 11/27/2008
I love Marshall- his reaction to everything is so hilarious, Toma is so cute! I feel like hugging them both and them laugh at them!
please update sooN!
| Account Disused chapter 3 . 10/26/2008
This is fantastic. Hope to see more of it soon.
| crimsonxXxdoll chapter 3 . 10/19/2008
Oh, my god, you HAVE to update this story. It's got to be one of the best crime stories I've ever seen on FP. I really, really, really hope you continue this story, if you're still on FP, that is. So many favorite authors of mine have left recently or just disappeared. Well, keep writing!
| HurtMe chapter 3 . 8/18/2008
This story is amazing. Made me want to keep reading until the very end. Very exciting.
| Lee Jung chapter 3 . 7/27/2008
o_0 I don't know how to get to the site...homepage isn't working...
Anywho, I'd love it if Marshall used his guitar as a weapon while they are chased. It could break while he's hitting a guy upside the head or something
| Curb Crasher chapter 3 . 7/18/2008
Oh my gosh! This is amazing! Especially the whole murder thing.
. . . Yeah, so, I just saw The Dark Knight. It's good to read something like this right after watching it.
| Barkers3 chapter 3 . 6/27/2008
Wow! Brilliant story!
A romanian pop-star and a cynical teen? - Different! Very different! But so good...!
Here in england, we call Murphy's Law - The SODS LAW for obvious reasons... I have no idea where you live, but if it's somewhere else, do you share this name or is it not in use? (just out of curiousity)
Once again, brilliant story! Very interesting, I cannot wait to see what happens next!
| Ish Mish Kiki chapter 3 . 6/15/2008
O my god.
So good, so exciting, so everything! I love it!