It is very comedic and it is such a great plot. I feel like I'm watching the start of a wonderful romantic comedy!

This is awesome, but kinda sad it hasnt been updated in so long. I really hope you update it one day.

All I have to say is LMFAO. I know it's like totally dramatic and serious, but totally funny. I really want to read how they escape! Please, please update!

I really like this story, it's very I have to say the romanian sometimes doesn't make sense,like "ceas tu insuti" actually means "clock yourself" but I doubt someone who doesn't know romanian would know and mind...I am just an evil person :)

:D

this is fun! both of them are idiots -_-

This story is amazing. Please update it whenever you have the time!

But I like Marshall's guitar.

I vote it gets smashed over the lady behind the desk's head.

I like this story. Mostly because Toma is Romanian and that is so badass. Because Romanian people rock.

You write very well. Your prose is direct, your storyline is most seriously entertaining. I like your characters quite a bit (see above). Oh yes.

Write more? Yes no?

*prods*

omg, lol!

I love Marshall- his reaction to everything is so hilarious, Toma is so cute! I feel like hugging them both and them laugh at them!

please update sooN!

This is fantastic. Hope to see more of it soon.

Oh, my god, you HAVE to update this story. It's got to be one of the best crime stories I've ever seen on FP. I really, really, really hope you continue this story, if you're still on FP, that is. So many favorite authors of mine have left recently or just disappeared. Well, keep writing!

This story is amazing. Made me want to keep reading until the very end. Very exciting.

o_0 I don't know how to get to the site...homepage isn't working...

Anywho, I'd love it if Marshall used his guitar as a weapon while they are chased. It could break while he's hitting a guy upside the head or something

Oh my gosh! This is amazing! Especially the whole murder thing.

. . . Yeah, so, I just saw The Dark Knight. It's good to read something like this right after watching it.

Wow! Brilliant story!

A romanian pop-star and a cynical teen? - Different! Very different! But so good...!

Here in england, we call Murphy's Law - The SODS LAW for obvious reasons... I have no idea where you live, but if it's somewhere else, do you share this name or is it not in use? (just out of curiousity)

Once again, brilliant story! Very interesting, I cannot wait to see what happens next!

O my god.

So good, so exciting, so everything! I love it!