Reviews for Incandescence
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Gorgeous piece. I love the simplicity of it, but the interwoven complexities ("each with their/own set of/circumstances") as well. Lovely lovely. Keep writing! :)
Faith Adeline chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
very good, solid pieces :) good job! keep it up.

Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
This is not your average ''weight of the world on my shoulders'' poem. Because the way you wrote the first three lines are like you have everything under control. I thought that was great. Keep it Up!