nice i lovee itt

So lol I was right about this. Good plot progression. Love this classic cliche. I love cliches. Yeh I love the mor eunexpected edgy stuff sometimes but cliches always make me bubbly inside. This a well written story. This is the second story I have read by you. The other one was the one with the Shadow Followers. Loved that as well. Back to Just Lose It. So far my fave character is Chad lol. He is so sweet, like the ideal guy. Awesome friend, good looking, sweet, genuine, possessive in a good way, protective, reliable. Not perfect but just ideal lol. Love him. Vincent is a no go lol. She is just denying her feelings for Chad and honestly I think that this is what she has been doing all along. I feel she's been denying her feelings and dating a string of guys who arent good for her just cuz she doesnt wanna accept the inevitable. Chad has been there for her through so much and she just doesnt see what is infront of her. I can see thats he's slowly starting to pick up ont hings though. She isnt a dumb girl. She's just slightly troubled.

Well frm the beginning of this story I felt it but now I'm sure. Chad is so in love with her and she's blind to it. I could see that from when he was first introduced and now from his jealousy even though it comes off as just him not wantin to hear abt the guys, but its totally jealousy. He's loved her forever and she cant see that. She only sees him as a friend and she doesnt even suspect how he feels. But I just know lol. I like this story so far. I dnt kno wat your intentions are for them but I just know that Chad cares for her beyond just this close best friend bond they have.

OMG I loves this story! I fell in love with my best friend, but he didn't love me back, and in the end we were just best buddies till he switched schools... :( You are and awesomness writer, and I am totally favoriting you if I haven't already. Keep writing!

- Christina

The ending was adorable :) It annoyed me a bit when you jumped from place to place without a breaker, but it didn't take me long to figure it out. The story was good even though there were some grammatical errors. At times it was hard to understand what you were saying, but it wasn't too bad. It was really cute :) Nice job :D

This is so original. LOL. I like how you started it off. It seemed so casual yet in depth. Awesome job :)

Because right now it's almost 2 in the morning this is going to be short but let me say, this is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read on fictionpress you write very well and I will check out your other work later peace.

That was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Wonderfully Ended! Extremely well-written story. LOVED THE CHARACTERS! and the story definitely got some reactions outta me, which is perfect. Thanks for this story. -Salem

that was lovely :)

This is actually a great story!

this story is so adorable! i love it!

Wow, amazing story i couldnt walk away from it at all. I had to see what happened! Great job!

omg! great ending! sry i couldn't review. no internet.

but GREAT GREAT job. i really do luv this story so much. and even though it was short it ended at the rite time. awesome job! i will look at ur other stuff very soon! keep it up!

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aw, loved the endind

it was soo cute

im so happy that they got together :]

hey Miss Katie, i see ur picture and u are beautiful!

im just new here registering but i've been here a couple of months visitng fictionpress and reading stories..

well im not really interested to register here but when i read ur story, Just Lose it~, now i want to register and submit a review for u :D.. i love it and that was really a romantic and cute story! hope u can make another great story and i will add it to my favourite stories! goodluck Miss Katie, i will grab a look at ur other stories.