Reviews for Who am I?
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
i really liked the beginnig of this poem when you say you give them the name of your high shcool and your gpa. but you don't really know who YOU are. nice concept. good poem
Ms. Critic chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Well, I will try to let the comment about Mormons not being Christians slide, and I thought the poem was very nice. Knowing I am a Child of God is a very important part of my life, and this poem just kind of speaks to me. Thanks Jon!
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
I'm gonna guess that you're a Mormon not a Christian like me after that, but if I look at it just from a poetic perspetive, it was pretty good. It probably would have flowed better if it had been separated into stanzas, it almost seemed more like dialoge this way.
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Aww.. this is just sweet! Well done!
Bob Evans chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
That's right, Jonny boy! You go for it!