|Reviews for Love Me, Love My Tofu|
| Ren chapter 3 . 2/23/2015
Yes! Finnally a vegan love story. Now if only that guy wasn't such an asshole. Yeah I'm vegan okay.
| Mia Homina Telos Writ chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
Love it. Are you vegan? Or just the charecter?
| Mia Homina Telos Writ chapter 5 . 3/2/2014
I liked it.
| Mia Homina Telos Writ chapter 3 . 3/2/2014
| DOMOxKUN chapter 5 . 10/18/2009
I disagree with that statement (:
I thought this story was well thought out !
But, I did think it ended abruptly and I really wasn't excepting it to end right there. Haha (:
Still, you got me hooked from the beginning which.. is hard to do. I usually have read a couple of chapters - while skipping paragraphs, to actually get into the story.
| elisieepee chapter 5 . 5/8/2009
i dont care if it stinks .
I still like it :D
| Kohlomere chapter 5 . 5/3/2008
It was cute.
| dropping dew chapter 2 . 5/3/2008
I liked this chapter too. This story is turning out to be a nice quick read. The only thing I would suggesst is maybe breaking up some of your longer pharagraphs. They get a little hard to read at times when there are so many lines bunched together.
| dropping dew chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
m...I like this as a first chapter because it captures your interest. I was pretty surprised when Elise said yes so quickly when James asked her to dinner. It kind of came out of nowhere!
| SimplyPeachy chapter 5 . 5/3/2008
It's not sucky, it just ended a bit suddenly.
But it was actually pretty good.
I still like Elise. She's awesome.
And James is ok.
I like Elise better though.
Still a bit self-rightcheous though!
| Sara Frisch chapter 5 . 5/3/2008
I kinda thought this story was cute, but I definitely would be interested in reading whatever story you decide to write next.
| Padalock chapter 5 . 5/3/2008
I really like this story, it was really well written and an interesting topic, and I'm looking forward to reading other of your works. Keep up the good work!
| firefly of hell chapter 3 . 4/23/2008
I like the story, but I think it could use a little more work in terms of length and character development. For example, your descriptions are very sparse, and you're focussed more on dialogue than describing the settings. It's also a bit slow paced. Keep up the good work!
Btw, you have anon. reviewing disabled, you should enable it.
| SimplyPeachy chapter 2 . 4/23/2008
I like it - nice second chapter.
I especially enjoy the complete opposites of every aspect of their lives, even their jobs, with Elise getting fired and James on the brink of a promotion. Very good, very clever.
A few grammar edits that jumped out at me. (I was reading for the story not the grammar)
Elise just nodded again and walked to the employee’s room should change to:
Elise just nodded again and walked to the employeeS' room
Put the s then the apostrophe so it's talking about all of the employees, not just one.
“Watch where you’re going, Matthews,” Peter Anderson, of Anderson & Cooper, told his young protégé, “Spilling the boss’ coffee never makes a good impression.”
For some reason, I feel it should be:
“YOU SHOULD watch where you’re going, Matthews,” Peter Anderson, of Anderson & Cooper, told his young protégé, “Spilling the boss’ coffee never makes a good impression.”
Obviously not capitalized, I was just bringing attention to the edit.
He wasn’t quite so sure where this was going.
I think you might want to change that line...I don't know. Something about it doesn't really ring with me, you know?
Anyway, nice next installment, keep 'em coming!
| SimplyPeachy chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Ah yes. Elise the self-righteous vegan.