|Reviews for First Kiss|
| Angela Nichole chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
another sweet one! this one's amazing too! :)
| vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
'Pretending to be mute,'
my favorite line. I don't know why, but it's just so gorgeous. (:
I like this poem. It's nice (:
| animatedfreak chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
hey hey! sweet poem you got there!
just a little comment, im not sure if it was meant to be like that but ur settings had changed alot, from a beach to a lake and from sunset to morning.
but other than that pretty sweet! ) naw