|Reviews for Worthless|
| half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Wow. I definitely get the sense of controlled anger - or managed - from this. When my poems are angry, I get sarcastic and bitter. I let my rage flow, but this - I could read it as if I were bitterly pissed at someone... but didn't tell them. Instead, I'd clench my teeth, turn away, and glare when they weren't looking. That's what this poem feels like to me.
My favorite lines are:
"you aren't even worth the few syllables
it would take to tell you to go away."
Wonderful. :D I like your style.
| ode to a nightingale chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Wow. Been listening to Linkin Park, have you? :P Haha, just kidding. It's really powerful, although I am probably the one brushing the one off... I've done that a couple of times lmao Anyway, I really like it. :)
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
very good, solid piece :)