I like hearing about Daniel's past, it makes him seem more human... even if it's about killing a girl when he was eleven...

Great story! I get excited when I see there's an update.

Keep writing, my dear... your very good!

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Well, I don't think reviews make the story, but the fact that it's so good. The chapter was interesting. I was wondering what trick Daniel had up his sleeve, then he threw the Halloween bit in... That made me laugh.

The plot seems to have thickened somehow.

C.S.

OMG i love this story! please keep updating because this story is super addicting! It is kinda sick and creepy but i just soak it up! And it is written so well!

I'm enjoying reading this! I really like hearing more about the history of the characters

I really like the Bianca character. She's a strong girl and that's cool

I hope her sister actually follows her words and finds the other detective. But on the other hand, it sounds like Bianca and Daniels father were in some serious stuff, duh 0_o.

The chapter was good, and I still love the suspense.

C.S.

I think this chapter was nice. Though I'm a bit surprised that she ended up chained again, and to a car door nonetheless, it's still good.

C.S.

I am confused here b/c the ending did not make it clear whether they were in the present again or the past. Also, whose Dad was Arthur?

Oh and btw I love this story to death I am just confused. xD

Aw dang, the suspense is killing me! Lol.

Great installment, I can't wait until the next chapter! :D

Keep it up!

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hey,

great stories i cant wait to see what happens next.

Its hard to read could you make the writing a bit bigger. thanks :)

Oh! That is so touching, and wonderful, and dark and twisted, and romantic all at the same time! I adore dark and twisted to no end b/c it usually gives you a good look into the past of the "evil guy".

As always, SBP an excellent peice with a great sense of urgency that shows me personally how easy it is to judge others. I've loved reading every line so far, keep it up.

What? She didn't to kill him. There's not enough compassion in me to keep some psycho alive. I'm gonna hit him, I'm gonna kill him afterwards, lol.

Wow, sh elet her sister escape and she stayed bhind, though it's a bit weird, it also makes sense.

The chapter was great as usual, and the suspense was awesome.

C.S.

Very nice! I really liked this chapter. I was glad that Amy got away, and I can't wait to see what she does now that she has escaped. The best part of the story was the ending. I was completely surprised. I loved that you had him escape, but now I can't wait to see what he will do. I would just try to be a little bit more descriptive on Bianca's part so that the reader can understand the emotions that she is going through. I hate waiting, but I love your story!

I loved chapter 6. It was really good. I enjoyed the challenge, although I felt that it went a little fast, and maybe could have used a little more detail. I can't wait to see where you take the next chapter.