Can't review properly right now, but nice story, just wanted it faved

Woah! Ahhmazing chapter! I'm spooked :]

gerat chapter it was very unpredictable but i have to say if Amy has just been tortured and nearly killed i dont think she woukd have the energy to run and catch things

Really creepy, but excellent at the same time. Is it rated T or M b/c I am easily disturbed and I want to know before I keep reading. I'd really like to continue, but just need to be safe xD

Wow, why didn't they lock him in the room her sister was in? I guess if they did then there wouldn't have been an interesting ending to the chapter.

Update soon.

C.S.

Great chapter. There was the part at the beginning with Bianca and Amy that felt a bit rushed... That's probably of course though because it was a rushed case. Maybe a bit more emotion in it would be good.

I'm curious to see how this challenge goes for Bianca, and if you're going to have it that she beats him...

C.S.

I really liked the descriptions in this chapter. Though Bianca ended up scewing herself over by not being able to act the way she'd wanted, it'll probably work out in the end.

What does he mean together they're just about the right age. Together they're two times older than his normal victims, lol.

As usual a good chapter with some intensity.

C.S.

This was an interesting chapter and nice insight into Bianca's father. As for Daniel, he comes off to me as one of those serial killers that are amateurs for some reason. But overall, Bianca's audacity may not turn out too well for her.

C.S.

I absolutely LOVE this story! That was flippin' amazing! Oh my goodness, you're going to have to update soon! Lol.

Definitely keep writing this, I loved it!

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Hey,

This review is actually for chapter 5 it just won't let me submit it there. Anyway, I love the changes that you made to the story. It gives the challenge much more urgency. I'm not sure who I want to win, but I think if I had to choose I would pick Daniel. To me that is much more unexpected, but if she loses and they fall in love, I would be very disappointed because that seems so cliche and impossible in any real world situation. I can't wait to see where you take it. As always I'll be waiting.

Thanks for writing,

Rachelle

I LOVE the remake. This is seriously THE best origional piece I have ever read on here. Its almost like Bianca and Daniel are secretly in love...Hahaha I almost WANT Amy to die so Bianca can be with Daniel!

hiya

i read this story, well, whats out so far, am im really keen to read the next installment, its tantalizing, i wanna know what happens next...

keep up the good work :D

I really liked this chapter. To me, it seems like it's the best one so far. Though Bianca's trying to read too much into Daniel's motives would've eventially gotten on my nerves if I were him... But it definitely fits.

C.S.

no you have to keep on writing soon. i get so excited when an email comes and it says "48"...right quickly

I've really enjoyed 48 so far. Over all it has been a very intriging stoy, and I can't wait to see where you decide to take it. I assume that you have the story mostly planned out, but I think it would help it there could be a little more intensity in the chapters, obviously you have had to introduce everything, but I feel like the story is moving a little slowly. Thanks for writing, no matter what you decide to do I can't wait to read the next chapter.