Reviews for monster and prince
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
i like the overall idea of the poem

"Balance your glitter/And your glamour,/With your false smile/And flimsy sense/Of chivalry." - the person this is describing reminds me of william faulkner (i know, way out of scope) but faulkner liked writing about stereotypical characters but with major flaws and your description reminds me of those characters

also, instead of using "xoxox" i would suggest getting rid of the space between lines and have a line to separate stanzas (i hope that made sense)

but overall, great poem

and thanks for your review :]
emmaliefje chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Stunning, Renee, really. I imagine the narrator ("me") to be like the knight's mistress or something... or child. *shudder* How do you think of things like this...