|Reviews for not so perfect|
| Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Ahah! I love this. Love, love this.
Of course, the subject matter is classic. And I like the way you break your lines - it makes everything so cutting and harsh.
I like this, too, because everybody knows this person.
My favorite part was probably:
"Every curve in your body
Makes a path for the eye."
Great work [:
| emmaliefje chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Haha, good one! I totally agree with it (I have a person in mind :P). Awesome!
(btw, my mom was on the phone for an hour, in case you had tried to call... try again :P)