Reviews for not so perfect
Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Ahah! I love this. Love, love this.

Of course, the subject matter is classic. And I like the way you break your lines - it makes everything so cutting and harsh.

I like this, too, because everybody knows this person.

My favorite part was probably:

"Every curve in your body

Makes a path for the eye."

Interesting thought.

Great work [:

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Katie
emmaliefje chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Haha, good one! I totally agree with it (I have a person in mind :P). Awesome!

(btw, my mom was on the phone for an hour, in case you had tried to call... try again :P)