Reviews for To Make a Scene |
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![]() ![]() i swear to god if nicole is magical i'm just done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it so much. I really enjoyed it. This Story made me Laugh, so hard. I love, love it. Thank you. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This deserves more reviews, honestly! I was smiling from ear to ear when Holly told Michael that she loved him and the ending was sooooo cute. They're getting married. Yey Happy endings! Ahhh. :" Really really had fun reading this. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holly and Michael are so adorable. Michael is wonderful. I loved reading this. I stayed up until 2 in the morning reading this, and I was so tired this morning. Good thing I'm on winter break. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED it! At the end I was practically punching the computer screaming 'just tell him already and get together'! You wrote all the characters beautifully so well done. Thanks for the Great, Amazing, and Captivating story (don't know why I felt the need to capitalize those words but I did)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to be blunt. I didn't like it. Why? Weak plot Cliche characters Cheesy storyline No hook Bad choice of words Odd mismatched paragraphs Unnecessary details Boring ... But that's just my opinion. It seems there already loads of people who absolutely adore your story. It's just me who doesn't understand why. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw Cutest couple everr! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so good. This should seriously be a book in real life! D: GET IT PUBLISHED |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm crying at the end of this chapter Rarely any stories make me cry You're amazing :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This first chapter is a bit confusing and add that to the fact that she starting to sound kinda perfect too, which is kinda annoying. So far she has perfect everything (as in looks) except she wears too much make up and too dark of clothes and now (because of the over usage of make and dark clothes) she looks plain? What? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a bit of a depressing start but I can see where you're going with this. I liked how you wrote it and I can't wait to find out more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! I was begining to think no one was going to make a move. I like reading your story and yes this chapter is perfect. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Yay! Great fantabulous story. Absolutely love it. |