Reviews for To Make a Scene
iPod chapter 8 . 7/26/2008
Number One Dancing Queen chapter 8 . 7/23/2008
I can really see those to going that was funny with the lost child. Anyways Great chap and update soon.
Kicon chapter 8 . 7/23/2008
Yay! Holly must be feeling sorry for herself, and she also just said she has poor grace! LOL!

Tasha Mandaire chapter 8 . 7/23/2008
I loved the whole thing with Daisy being lost and calling Holly and Michael her mother and father. Another gr8 chapter. Keep up the good work! .

rachelaine chapter 8 . 7/23/2008
I liked this chapter. The Daisy bit was so cute! And Steve, he strikes me as a big Teddy Bear. :P I really like Michael..he just seems like a genuine guy. :) Update soon I hope.
Writing4Eternity chapter 8 . 7/22/2008
Loves it
Kicon chapter 7 . 7/20/2008
OMG! Lisa and Holly were LAUGHING and JOKING with each other! There's something wrong about that! But I love this chapter!

CorporationCrazy chapter 7 . 7/18/2008
I got kind of grossed out to be truthfull...but it was good all the same. I can't believe...ugh! Stomach hurting!

Let's just leave it at good chapter, kay
Lady of Confusion chapter 7 . 7/16/2008
cool...but soon
Writing4Eternity chapter 7 . 7/15/2008
“I was six, I think. I hadn’t known what a lighter was, so when I found one, I got all excited and took it to the bathroom.”

I paused, and looked at Nicole and Josh. They were still listening.

“So, you know, a seven year old, and a lighter. Eventually, the seven year old should figure out how to use it.”

Was she six or seven? Anyway, this chapter was okay. :-0
rachelaine chapter 7 . 7/15/2008
Good chapter. ) And I reread the summary and I like it so much better than the "status quo" thing. :)
iPod chapter 7 . 7/14/2008
Dayum, I KNEW it was Lisa and Kidd! Yay me! Snaps for Hannah!

lol screw morlas xD This chapter was great, awesome, cool, the best, perfect, totally lovable and all of the above!

Happy Writingss!
Number One Dancing Queen chapter 7 . 7/14/2008
Great chapter. I can't wait till Holly and Michael go out. Update soon. _
CorporationCrazy chapter 6 . 7/2/2008
That was ttyl awesome! Except for a few mistakes, IT WAS GREAT!

I have a few questions so can i send you a message? yea, i'll do that.


You've got to update! As in now!
Original Screen Name chapter 6 . 7/2/2008
Love Love Love LOVE IT!

Write more!


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