LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

AWESOME!

This rocks my freakin pink sockss!

lol the parts where nichole is yelling at Josh

xD

LOVE THIS!

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:D

hey, you've got a few confusing typos

one: grabbed the cars out of the ignition

two: kept in tough

anyway, i love the story and the outline.

This was my favorite chapter so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Update soon! :D

A bit cheesy towards the end, but overall a great chapter.

~~Rebecca

ACK! This is one of thee best stories I have read on FP.

Of course, you know, there are a coulpe of misplaced or missing quotation marks but, other than that, great job!

neonchickennugget

Best. Ever.

This was really good. By far the best chapter. At first, I thought this was going to be stupid, just because "changing the status quo" and everything. I thought you could of made it less, little kidish maybe. It's really turning into a story now. I think im really going to like it! :)

i love the story cant wait for more!

-ifly*hugs*

_ Really awesome story. I can't wait for the next update. I would have reviewed last night...but fiction press wouldn't let me login!

hi dd, its good so far and i hope u make more stories!

You had a very well written introduction, I liked it

hope you update soon

I would say it's too brief, but it IS an intro, so that's acceptable.

I don't think you ever said the main character's name, but you did an EXCELLENT job decribing her. The other characters I was somewhat disappointed with, but like I said, it's an intro, so I'm not exactly sure...

It sounds like a cliche' story, but has the potential to be something more, you know?

I liked your word usage, but the plot was a little jumpy. Like, I still don't know how we got to detention, but maybe it's just me.

Please keep writing and I'll keep reading!

~Luna Turner