aw. that's sweet. awesome chapter. i can't believe it's over. well, it was fantastic while it lasted. good job.

This needs to be edited: Instead I just grabbed the cars out of the ignition and started unlocking the door.

I think you meant I just grabbed the keys. LOL.

I liked this chapter. It was so sweet. And she needs to realize that Michael likes her and to stop being so dense. That is all.

Love it!

This was a good addition to the introduction. However, I found it just a bit odd that Cale had the DVD from middle school on him. That was random, who would just carry that around at all times? LOL. But I still liked it. Maybe just have him threatening her instead of actually having the DVD on him?

Haha, but I loved how she got that Lisa girl back. And I like her new friends, especially Nicole, she's so chipper all the time.

Michael sounds like a good match for Holly. :)

Great job!

-KatieTheWriter-

haha i think it was a bit of a cory ending, but i love the couple regardless. gotta say i really loved the chemistry between holly and michael. :) kudos! congrats on finishing your first story

I like your style of writing. This is definitely interesting so far, and I'm intrigued to read on.

Sad it had to come to the end...great job. Love the story from beginning to end. Still will be one of my favourites. You write really well so keep up the good work! yours truly,

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...wow. i love this story so much! sorry that i haven't written reviews for all of the other chapters, i was just so excited to click the button for the next chapter. [so excited that i've read all 20 chapters in 2 days...sounds like a long time but i had to do it secretly since my parents think i'm doing hw...haha...]

this scene was my fave. second favorite scene was the lost kid in the park. hilarious. XD

I totally love this last chapter. They are finally together!Yaya!

I love them both glad there finally together. Update ASAP!

I know what you mean about the hw. I hate it.

This... is amazing. I feel so warm and fuzzy inside :)

I'm so sad that it'as over! Such a great amazing story... :] I'm glad yo uwrote it and im glad I read it. and no, it was NOT over done in any way and Ill be waiting for the epilogue. Oh, and I got homework in all of my subjects the first day back :]

Fluffy yes, but adorable nonetheless. Can't wait for the epilogue.

JM

(sniffs) It's over. This was a really good story. The sappy ending is kinda a 180 of the beginning. Endings always suck because you don't want things to end, but 'all good things must come to an end.'

loved it!

Oh...my...God! I can't believe this story is over! It makes me sad in a way...but really happy that they ended up together! This story is amazing and I really, truly love it.

~Kicon