Reviews for Once There Was A Little Cat
LotusGrave chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
*Cuddles the kitten* How absolutly ADORABLE!
AuthoressSama chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
AW! He sounds so cute! (cuddles with the kitty)
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
cute. flows pretty well.

i'd suggest adding punctuation.

and maybe another stanza, because it seems incomplete.

.adrian.
Ghost Planet chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Too many 'that's in the first 3 lines.

And it seems...unfinished. Like there should be another stanza or something.

I'd work on it, if I was you.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
:) Hehe cool. I like this poem. Write on!

~Anna~ _
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
that's adorable! great job!