WOW! You guys have a really good writing style going here. Also, is this really all there is of the story? I hope not; that way I can see what happens to them.

Anyways, that was really good, so keep it up!

-Chuu

An intriguing story line. I'll be looking forward to more, though rp-styles tend to be annoying. But I didn't see a lot of repetition which seems to be a common thing in rp style stories, so it really didn't seem noticeable that both authors were switching.

Great story! Absolutly fantastic narration, your writing skills are really good. I love the plot line too. But, it says this is complete. Is that true? Because it doesn't seem complete. I hope it isn't, I'd really like to read more!

Jo x