Reviews for Permanent Progress
SatiricalEntity chapter 16 . 1/20/2010
i love it :) but it needs more :( and i think maybe the whole discovering secrets idea needs to be explored further, it's a bit foreign to me :) keep writing!
RedHairedWriter chapter 16 . 5/17/2009
no fair! you can't just leave me hanging!
RedHairedWriter chapter 10 . 5/16/2009
I feel sorry for dawn but i don't think Lee's helping the situation.
RedHairedWriter chapter 7 . 5/16/2009
I like the way she thinks: "you'll go out with me" good one *thumbs up*
RedHairedWriter chapter 6 . 5/16/2009
It just occured to me that I haven't checked to see if this is a complete story... I'm going to be mortified if I run out of chapters! It's addictive!
RedHairedWriter chapter 5 . 5/16/2009
hey um, The review button is green you know that right? lol I'm teasing - it might once have been purple.

I like it. Bit short. Bit quick. But I like it.
RedHairedWriter chapter 4 . 5/16/2009
and that's just day 1
RedHairedWriter chapter 3 . 5/16/2009
I'm surprised you need to ask for reviews!

I love that Lee came to fetch her from her class. I think in some odd way I might not hate dawn, But i think that's a good thing.

Don't stop writing - Ever.
RedHairedWriter chapter 2 . 5/16/2009
you have a gift. Seriously. I love your characters. They're so real (in an unbelievable way) it make me wish I could really meet them.
RedHairedWriter chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
WoW. I really enjoyed that. I don't usually read first persons but this is lovely.
MyCookiesNotYours chapter 16 . 12/30/2008
Wow, ok so I just found this story yesterday, and I knew I wanted to read it. But when I saw it only had 16 chapters, and unfinished, it sort of was a downer. But I do like the story itself, though still not finished. But yeah, I noticed those little errors, that I make too. :)

Good job with it though!

And good luck with it's ending?
Silvermoon of Forestclan chapter 16 . 12/23/2008
Well... i really love the chracters and how u built them and... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
kirstenb.0319 chapter 6 . 10/9/2008
Okay Okay I'll review since you want them so Anyway, I think the story's good. I just finished the 22 chapters of Cinderella's Real Name Was and decided to go on your page to see if you'd written anything else. It turns out that you have, so I chose this one and it also seems interesting and well-written.
sunshine888 chapter 16 . 9/11/2008
I really like this story. Hope you date-up soon. And a writers'block can happen to everyone. And it is not fun. I have one for a year or so now.. Good luck with writing!

-sunshine 8
BeautyisFleeting chapter 16 . 8/19/2008
Amazing story! I love all of the characters you've created! I hope for some Lilith X Lee action soon :D

Update soon! :D
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