Reviews for hangman
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Review Game prize from dragonflydreamyr

I didn't like the rhyme scheme because it was not really consistent. I did like the piece though because it was really interesting with phrases like "speak in sky speech" and "making tears from stardust." Really great images.
Dani P chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
i really like this poem, but in the 4th line u use stars 2wice which sounded kinda wierd to me. other than that amazing