|Reviews for fold away my past|
| half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
Such a wonderful line. It had me stunned with its brilliance really: "You count the tocks on the clocks / just to make sure time isn't / cheating again." Wow. Breathtaking, as was the rest of the poem... but those lines especially.
May I add that to my quotebook?
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
My grandmother had Alzeimer's / dementia. lovely, sad imagery.