Reviews for fold away my past
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
konnichi wa

Such a wonderful line. It had me stunned with its brilliance really: "You count the tocks on the clocks / just to make sure time isn't / cheating again." Wow. Breathtaking, as was the rest of the poem... but those lines especially.

May I add that to my quotebook?

Ha det

-Shan-
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
My grandmother had Alzeimer's / dementia. lovely, sad imagery.