Reviews for Seasonal Haikus
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
lovely imagery in these. my favourite is spring, but the others are also nice.

however, i'm not sure 'wild' is really one syllable.

-adrian
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
I like particularly the first poem. The idea of flying is a good metaphor for the awakening nature.

Ich weiß nicht, ob der englische Muttersprachler bei „spring“ die springen-Assoziation hat, aber für mich passt das gut zum Fliegen.