Reviews for For you
Chidaruma Kamisori chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
This is sweet.

Like when you are so deeply involved with an idea that you can't see any options but one.

Very sweet.

Luna Turner chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I love the shorter poems. You have to be skilled to write one though, because you have to convey so much meaning.

Congratulations, you have skill. This poem is short and powerful, very well done.

Luna Turner
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/19/2008
This is kinda cute and sweet, though nowhere near your best work. I like the ending a lot.
Qzie chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Short and sweet. Can't help but smile after reading it. Chat later. -Qzie
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
short and sweet _
Bazooka Joy chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
This is indeed very cute. I picture a little boy in elementary school trying to tell the little girl just how he feels.
gg. lass chapter 1 . 4/23/2008

yours until the wind changes,

Daichiko chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
This poem is very nice and touching. But i think 'a' in the first line should be switched to 'the' and maybe add commas?

So it would be:

For you.

The color is yellow,

yellow is the sun,

a sun I paint

... for you.

Other than that, it was nice! If you have time, can your R&R my poem? thanks! and nice job :D