Reviews for Seven Minutes in Heaven
Lyssa O chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Aw, what a cute story! I'm sitting here, in a near silent room with about ten other people, and trying not to laugh out loud at the cute hilarity of this. Instead, I'm grinning stupidly and who cares if anyone sees!

Ashley's determination is so strong that it makes her crush on Devon genuine. I mean, I'm not too familiar with stories with popular girls (assuming that she IS popular, head cheerleader and all) vying for those geeky guys, so I'm pretty sure this is the only story I've read with this scenario, albeit it's a short story. Makes it all the more sweet! Devon is so adorable! He made me remember my old chemistry lab partners, which one (Patrick) was not so geeky (lacrosse team and wore all those skate shoe brands) and had a not so secret crush on me, but the other (Connor) was so so so sweet and quiet (but not geeky, as he was on the wrestling team) and I ended up having a crush on him by the end of the year. Haha, but circumstances did not have me being captain of the cheerleading squad, much less a cheerleader at all, and he moved away after that year never to be seen again...sighs all around.

In any case, this story was fun to read, and written very well!
Pione chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
I like how feel-good this story is. :)
Kate Marshall chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
*rolls eyes* You know it's awesome. So there.

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blurrylights chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
This was an awesome story- absolutely adorable! Devon seems like a sweetheart, and Ashley is adorable too. Great job! :)
stranger12 chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
Aw, this was so the cutest thing ever!

I think this might just be the very first original one-shot I read, ever. Or at least the first that isn't a 20.0 word monster. Really cute and adorable. Would like to see more of Devon and Ashley, though I'm guessing it's just hopeful wishing on my part, huh?

In any case, please do continue writing, longer stories like BBD and short and cute like this one.
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
This. Is. Insanely. ADORABLE! OMG, I love it! I had this huge grin on my face the entire time I was reading it. :D


Strawberry xx
funkypunky chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
hahaha..sneaky;p i loved it
Elle Winters 9 chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
wow this was a surprising good light read. cute
Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
"but you couldn’t help like him" I think you mean liking, or "to like".

"Seven Minutes to Heaven" the title says "Seven minutes IN heaven", which I think is what the game is called... haha. Consistency?

Haha this is rather adorable. I was afraid it would be fricking CORNY since it's obviously the stereotypical popular-vs-unpopular crush scenario. But it worked, and you didn't make it completely lame and stereotypical. Nice job! :) I love how you went into details with the characters, making it seem realistic, like she was actually half-stalking him. Good job with this.


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moshpitqueen chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
oh my god this was amazing. haha, you're right, every girl went through a nerd crush, and i'm no exception. XD
storyofagirl ox chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
ohmygod! sammy, this story is so good. you DEFINATELY have to keep writing on it. this is being added as one of my favorite stories. please dont stop writing it.
andee lee chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Aw, a rolling backpack! I instantly loved him after I read that, lol.

That was so cute. It's funny how she's supposed to be this confident cheerleader but can't work up the courage to talk to her geek love.

Loved it,

Keimei-chan chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Aw, this was just to sweet!

This was pure fluff, I loved it!

Great job!
Devin-Jamie chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Hahah. Oh, I love love loved this. Extremely cute. And made me laugh.
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