Reviews for Gothic Enchantment
irishangel03 chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
I am finding myself sucked in to your story. I love how origional it is and I really hope that you find your muse soon. I am almost feeling a bit of a supernatural thing going on with Frenchie and Cloud. They seem to have a dangerous side with all their secrets. I would really like to see Rose come into herself one day and be the tough chick that can bring guys to their knees lol. Thank you for writing this and I do hope you continue it. - Patricia
MissNightOwl chapter 3 . 11/14/2010
MissNightOwl chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
MissNightOwl chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
It is weird you named him Gabriel since Gabriel was a name of an angel. Loved it so much that I will seriously worship this story. INCREDIBLE!
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 4 . 11/3/2010
Odd but good story :D
xxCandlelightxx chapter 4 . 10/12/2010
something that really helps me is when i read the story over again and when it gets to the ending, i try and imaging the different things that could happen, different scenarios, like

where was saber and why did cloud have to go to him that fast?

does it have anything to do with why cloud has so much money and was able to buy that new car?

does kiriya have some sort of possession issues and why is it that he can fight so well?

hopefully that could prompt some ideas.

if you need a beta, you can message me

BaleighTheMadQueen chapter 4 . 8/12/2010
If you don't continue this story its quite possible that i might die, and you don't want murder on your hands do you? I love the fact that she's so innocent, it's hilarious. I think Reaper and Thorn should start going out . . .just saying. And Saber should meet this totally preppy girl who he falls for but he doesn't like the fact that he has. Then she should convert to goth-ness and they should through a party. Oh, and they should kill Kiriya on grounds of sexual assault! Yep, those are my ideas . . .oh, and they should have more problems in English class.


x.x buk wurm x.x chapter 4 . 8/11/2010
You have to write soon this story is amazing! rose cud start having feelings for that over guy, but she chooses cloud in the end ;]. or i dunno cloud cud loose his memory or sumet. x
Cybernetic chapter 3 . 8/9/2010
Poof! xD
goodbyes chapter 4 . 6/14/2010
hey,, return the story! come on!
goodbyes chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
goodbyes chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
Wow. this is great.
PadlockLOL chapter 4 . 5/19/2010
i think the french guy should come back in again. this is wat i thought may happen coz rose just started dateing cloud and shes starting 2 feel new feelings 4 the french guy she tells cloud that nowing each other just 4 only 1 day wasn't enough to start going out they needed 2 know each other a year or so but while thats happening things starts 2 spark between her a frenchy guy. and now she has 2 guys she loves dearly coz she bonded with them a lot. but i'm not saying whiles cloud and her trying 2 start to be friend doesn't mean he can stop hugging her showing her his feelings. After some time spending with both of them she needs 2 choose. what you think? thats what i thought might happend anyway hope that help u love ur story hope u carry on can'y wait 2 see more
Valinta chapter 3 . 5/5/2010
Oh, or Cloud and Thorn could be called away for something, and Rose would be left alone and like the warning from her first day, she got attacked...And I'm thinking that she gets pulled into the boy's bathroom or something, and Kiyira (I spelt it wrong again) comes in to go to the bathroom or something and rescues her.

Of course, I was like, half asleep upon thinking of this, and I didn't have any coffee or anything...And... If I seem slightly deulsional, I'm so sorry.

Also, since I'm not one for replying after I get a reply myself, you're welcome for te review and I'd be ecstatic if it worked out.
Valinta chapter 4 . 5/3/2010
Em...Kiyria (I spelt his name wrong, I know it) could try to come onto Rose or soemthing... Or go for Thorn to piss off Cloud, and THEN go for Rose...

Would that work?
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