Reviews for Brought Down Guinevere
Kate Marshall chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
You know, I'm a big fan of free verse and even without any rhyming pattern, I love how this flows. ;D Great job! xD
Isca chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Good imagery.
Satsumaimo chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
Mhmm, I like it xD

seriously awesome imagery
MuffinQueen chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Very lovely! I particularly like that she "ran from Eden." The pronouns, too, are used very well. "An avalanche of him" just has the nicest ring to it.
Written chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
gorgeous. I love the imagery of the thread at the very end. Wow, seriously.