Interesting story - I would like you to update~~

Narq.

WOW! You're a really good writer. And you write pretty much exactly the same as me (when I'm not writing from Addie's POV). We both write using heaps of adjectives, which is why I reckon newspaper articles should be made illegal. Who decided that you couldn't put describing words in articles, eh? I mean, don't they want to make reading the freaking newspaper interesting? If I thought it was so well written I'd jolly well read it! (ps: I don't actually talk like that, before you dismiss me as a crazed-literature-spaz)

Can't wait for chapter 3. Keep me updated girl!

pps: OMG i think you are the first fellow aussie person's story I read yet! I'm so excited! :D

Your story is quite well-written, and your characters seem interesting, so keep updating, I'd love to read more.:)