Reviews for In The Real World
KatieTheWriter chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
This was very well written. Good job. I enjoyed reading it!

Needa S chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Such a caring heartfelt piece. Awesome job. Thanks for pointing out my spelling error in my new poem. I thought it was cool to hear your name is Anna as well. Thanks for all your kind reviews. God Bless you.
Luna Turner chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
I like the message behind this poem. It was well written and is going on my favorites.

One thing... the rythym was a bit off sometimes... and the rhyming also... but for the most part... it's all that a free verse poem should be.

~Luna Turner