Reviews for Betrayed
na5ni chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Hey i really liked your story. It may be a long shot but i do hope you'll update it. Really intrigued by it.
chicagobabe chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
hey I loved it, you should tottaly continue on with the story :D.
MarieAnn chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
Please continue with this story. I want to know what happens that "makes her world fall apart." PLEASE Update soon. I got really intrigued by your pitch for the story and after reading this prologue I got hooked. Can't wait to read more! :-)
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Update soon! I want to see the reaaction!

Nice work.