Reviews for of SelfBetrayal
mmmmmmmm chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
this feels like the kind of introspection that I've tried to achieve before, but can never quite honestly do. I think we tend to trick ourself about ourselves, just because it's harsh to receive criticism and we don't want to take that from our own minds, too. but you seem to be honest about yourself [and with yourself] here.

the whole thing seems sad, but still calm and matter-of-fact, which is a cool tone for a poem.

great job.
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
''I have sought sanctuary in stars, poetry and people'' that was my favorite line. Poetry is sanctuary for some who have no other way of letting out their feelings. This was a very excellent piece. Keep it Up!